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Concrete Nautilus February 27, 2010

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“Life’s a journey,” they say.

If that’s true, I feel off course.

Will I be bird food?

Nothing but an empty, bleached shell of my former self?

No.  I’ll serve a purpose.

Dropped on concrete, an unusual sight.

Someone found me and smiled.

She’s learning to take notice of life.

When she lifted her head, I was there.

For her, I’m a reminder.

Change is necessary;

To stop changing is to die.

Though it’s scary, I’ll survive.

I’ll grow into my purpose,

And I’ll bear for her the message of grace.

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1. L.L. Barkat - February 27, 2010

““Life’s a journey,” they say.

If that’s true, I feel off course.”

Oh, I really like that part. I love the honesty of it. I wonder what we find in the off-course times. Maybe we find it is exactly where we needed to be?

So glad you’re participating!

2. nancy - February 28, 2010

i love the last line

smileyange - March 31, 2010

Thanks for reading! I always welcome feedback and new friends!

3. Make a Life, If Not a Living - March 4, 2010

[...] All RAP Participants Maureen’s Passing Time in Lent Ann’s Do Not Let Anything Keep You Kathleen’s Through the Keyhole LL’s Flight and Pittsburgh nAncY’s Pages of White Glynn’s There Was a Barn Raising, Once Erica’s After Debbra’s Lent’s Call to Worship Karanee’s Undiscovered Way Milton’s Lent and Late Night Erin’s Draw Me In Cindy’s Hijack Tim’s Haiku of Moving Snow Curator’s (LL and Claire’s) Verse Monica’s Clouds Break Smileyange’s Concrete Nautilus [...]

4. Wendy - April 9, 2010

I like this, especially since I know where you were/are when it was written.


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